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1. Practice:Write your essay in 30 minutes to the question below.
2. Explanation:Read the explanation and your essay at the same time to see what to do differently.
3. Examples:Compare your essay to other student essays and learn the mistakes to avoid.
4. Revision:Correct the structural and grammatical errors you made while adding some words.
5. Your Score:Submit your revision to me for scoring and feedback (within 24 hours).
3.
Example
The Essay
Feedback
We all make the same mistakes when we learn something new, so listen with YOUR essay in your hand and fix the similar mistakes you make in grammar and structure.
Score
24/30 . If this essay were submitted during a real test after 30 minutes, the level would be GOOD.
Remember
It's all about word count: the more words you type (that don't repeat), the higher your score will be.
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last updated (9/29/2009)
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